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Martin Gumpert - question / edit request

Martin Gumpert, a physician, is quoted in the final paragraph of the section Scintifific Rejection. Is this the same Martin Gumpert? If so could I suggest a link? 2.14.10.86 (talk) 12:49, 11 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Ahem. Section is Scientific Rejection. ‘Scuse my bad typing 2.14.10.86 (talk) 12:58, 11 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Yes, thank you for noticing. I have fixed it. Grorp (talk) 00:48, 12 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! (Travelling in France at the moment so different IP but I made original request). 185.113.50.43 (talk) 15:52, 13 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Time to remove the template?

It was added in 5 April 2010[1][2] by a since-banned[3] user. --Guy Macon (talk) 01:04, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I concur that it originated from Cirt (despite the re-dating in 2018). His talk page post at Talk:Dianetics/Archive 13 § Primary sources doesn't give much to go on. The article could use some work, but those tags are definitely stale. ▶ I am Grorp ◀ 02:34, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Regardless of why it was originally placed, Dianetics#Concepts specifically is still pretty bad. Hubbard was extremely prolific, and his church's history is extremely convoluted, so any attempt to summarize Dianetics based mainly on his own writing is guaranteed end up being WP:OR. The section should still mainly summarize reliable WP:IS with primary sources used sparing and to clarify specific points of confusion. I would also suggest cutting Lewis as well. Grayfell (talk) 03:30, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Please clarify what you mean by suggest cutting Lewis as well. I see only one Lewis citation. ▶ I am Grorp ◀ 04:15, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, my comment was too vague. To put it another way, I think some sections should be rewritten to focus more on reliable, independent sources. I understand this wouldn't be a simple undertaking.

Whether or not Lewis is reliable/independent is debatable, but my suggestions would be to just remove it as a source completely. It seems easier to figure that kind of thing out sooner rather than later if the article is rewritten. Grayfell (talk) 05:28, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

From WP:WTRMT: Maintenance templates are not meant to be in articles permanently. (emphasis added)

I say we simple delete anything that is only supported by original research or excessive primary sources and remove the tag. If this reduces the article to a stub, so be it. We can always add to it whenever we have proper sourcing for the addition. --Guy Macon Alternate Account (talk) 16:41, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I will take a stab at it. (in progress...) ▶ I am Grorp ◀ 05:36, 20 April 2024 (UTC) In my first pass through the article, I got to the end of the "Concepts" section. Will continue another day. ▶ I am Grorp ◀ 07:56, 20 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Notes

Notes from my work.

The Nation of Islam part doesn't belong in the lead. Putting the references here for the moment.^[1] Along the way, I noticed NOI is also mentioned in these sources:^[2]^: 359^[3]^: 253n8
Removed several items from 'further reading' that were also used as citations.
Enhanced some references (URLs, ISBNs, OLs, etc.).
Swapped out (tertiary) source "Philosophers and Religious Leaders".
Swapped out Hubbard/CofS sources wherever I could.
Removed a bunch of junk.
Did some verification along the way, though a few sources I had no access to.

▶ I am Grorp ◀ 08:08, 20 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sources

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- Gray, Eliza (October 5, 2012). "The Mothership of All Alliances". The New Republic. Retrieved November 19, 2012.
- Rossetter, Shelley; Tobin, Thomas C. (18 October 2012). "Louis Farrakhan renews call for self-determination among Nation of Islam followers". Tampa Bay Times. Archived from the original on 5 November 2012. Retrieved 19 November 2012.
- Mohammed, Asahed (February 28, 2013). "Nation of Islam Auditors graduation held for third Saviours' Day in a row". Final Call. Retrieved April 22, 2013.
^ Reitman, Janet (2011). Inside Scientology: The Story of America's Most Secretive Religion. Houghton Mifflin Harcourt. ISBN 9780618883028. OL 24881847M.
^ Urban, Hugh B. (2011). The Church of Scientology: A History of a New Religion. Princeton University Press. ISBN 9780691146089.

[1] 
Gray, Eliza (October 5, 2012). "The Mothership of All Alliances". The New Republic. Retrieved November 19, 2012.
Rossetter, Shelley; Tobin, Thomas C. (18 October 2012). "Louis Farrakhan renews call for self-determination among Nation of Islam followers". Tampa Bay Times. Archived from the original on 5 November 2012. Retrieved 19 November 2012.
Mohammed, Asahed (February 28, 2013). "Nation of Islam Auditors graduation held for third Saviours' Day in a row". Final Call. Retrieved April 22, 2013.

[2] Gray, Eliza (October 5, 2012). "The Mothership of All Alliances". The New Republic. Retrieved November 19, 2012.

[3] Rossetter, Shelley; Tobin, Thomas C. (18 October 2012). "Louis Farrakhan renews call for self-determination among Nation of Islam followers". Tampa Bay Times. Archived from the original on 5 November 2012. Retrieved 19 November 2012.

[4] Mohammed, Asahed (February 28, 2013). "Nation of Islam Auditors graduation held for third Saviours' Day in a row". Final Call. Retrieved April 22, 2013.

[reitman-2] Reitman, Janet (2011). Inside Scientology: The Story of America's Most Secretive Religion. Houghton Mifflin Harcourt. ISBN 9780618883028. OL 24881847M.

[urban-3] Urban, Hugh B. (2011). The Church of Scientology: A History of a New Religion. Princeton University Press. ISBN 9780691146089.

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